Note: Our site is temporarily unavailable. KCC IT is working to resolve login issues for the site. Please try to resubmit your paper later this week. We hope to have the site available again by Oct. 11th. Need help brainstorming? Having trouble organizing your thoughts? Need ideas on how to improve your overall content and clarity? If so, why not seek assistance from one of our English department faculty?

If you prefer face-to-face help, schedule an appointment at our Cedar Rapids or Iowa City Writing Center. You may also drop in for an appointment, and a faculty member will work with you if no appointment is scheduled at that time.   

Cedar Rapids (3067 Cedar Hall)  https://kirkwood.mywconline.net
Iowa City (Room 134)   https://kirkwood.mywconline.com

To access the COW (Center for Online Writing) please follow the instructions below.

Center for Online Writing
http://www.kirkwood.edu/pdf/uploaded/1399/cow(1).jpg

Note: requests for feedback are limited to 1 submission per week and 3 submissions per semester.Y ou are welcome to go to one of our face-to-face writing centers if you need immediate assistance.

 

 
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English Department faculty will read your paper and provide general feedback, so think about asking us to help with the criteria for writing effective papers (see below). Because our goal is primarily educational, we do not proofread papers or correct APA or MLA style. Doing so would make us better editors but would not help you improve your writing.

Criteria for effective papers:

Purpose: Is the purpose of the paper clear and accomplished?
I'm supposed to be describing an event. Have I?
Depth: Is the topic fully covered enough to satisfy my reader?
Where would readers probably want more information, or where might they be confused?
Did I explain my subject enough? Should I include more information?
Focus: Does the paper exhibit a purposeful plan and maintain its focus? 
Language: Do any errors interfere with the paper's message?
Documentation: Are sources documented? [Note, we will flag areas of the paper that need documentation or inconsistencies in usage.] Please consult the APA and MLA links provided on the site; we are not responsible for making sure your paper is properly documented.
Other Examples: Does the introduction grab reader's attention and establish a clear purpose?  How might the paper support its argument further? (It sounds weak so far.)
I don't like my conclusion. How do you react to it?
All my sentences seem to sound the same. Any advice?

Specific requests from you will yield more helpful responses than simply sending in a paper and expecting a reader to fix it. Letting us know in what area you want feedback will make the whole process much smoother and help guide our responses.

CITING SOURCES IN MLA AND APA

HOW DO I CITE SOURCES USING MLA?  Click here for help: 
http://guides.kirkwood.edu/citation/mla

HOW DO I CITE SOURCES USING APA? Click here for help:  
http://guides.kirkwood.edu/citation/APA
 

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